Preliminary exercise: learner response
1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class. WWW: good research good opening shot- good angle narrative elements distant lip sync cutaways to party - use of black and white camera movement EBI: more detailed shot list more dishevelled subject- make up etc students' feedback: WWW: very good research link between lyrics & visuals close-ups good editing black and white EBI: shot list too little could be a longer flashbacks mise en scene 2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your work. WWW: i have done a good research link between lyrics & visuals, close-ups, good editing EBI: shot list too little , could be a longer flashbacks, mise en scene 3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise statement of intent ? -